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雅思写作美文鉴赏:医院服务对于病人康复影响

作者: 阿信 发布时间: 2020年03月27日 15:57:02

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雅思写作美文鉴赏:医院服务对于病人康复影响

  [题目]You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

  Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic.A number of different medical traditions are now widely known and used: Western medicine , herbal medicine, acupuncture, homoeopathy, and so on. You should write at least 250 words.You should you your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

  [提示]

  你可以按照下面的提纲写作:

  Different medical traditions (a list of examples is given)

  Patient’s mental attitude: the way the patient feels about the treatment

  Effectiveness of the treatment: how much better does it make the patient?

  在写作之前,请问自己以下的问题:

  Do I think the patient’s attitude is important?

  What examples can I give where the patient’s attitude was important, or irrelevant?

  在文章中你必须:

  Describe some of the different ways people feel about medical treatment (hopeful, hopeless, trusting, skeptical...).

  Say if in your opinion the feelings affect the treatment or not.

  Give examples to support your argument about why the treatments were effective or ineffective.

  [范文](在阅读此范文之前你至少已经花了一些时间写作)

  A wide range of medical treatments is available today. Patients may wonder which will be the most effective, and whether their own mental attitude to the type of treatment might affect its success. This essay will consider the second of these questions.

  Many people visit their doctor or go to hospital with complete trust in the expert care offered by conventional services. However, some people do not get a satisfactory result. Their initial positive attitude towards their treatment does them little good.

  Similarly, those patients who trustfully choose alternative treatments over traditional medicine may find themselves disillusioned. Less rigorous qualification standards among alternative practitioners may mean that some healers give ineffective or damaging advice.

  On the other hand, patients may try a style of treatment with some skepticism. A person used to conventional medicines and drugs may be suspicious of treatments based on diet and lifestyle changes. Yet if they follow such programs, they may in fact notice improvements in their conditions, in spite of their skepticism. Equally, a patient opposed to conventional medicine may have an accident and be saved by the effective treatment of conventional emergency services.

  In conclusion, it appears that the mental attitude of the patient is not the most significant factor in determining the outcome of the treatment. Patients who enter treatment confidently may leave disillusioned while those who begin treatment skeptical of the results may find themselves surprised with what they have gained. Patients should seek the advantages which each style of care can offer.

  Remember: this sample answer is one of several satisfactory ways to answer the question. Other essays which respond to the writing task would also be acceptable.Source: Prepare for IELTS, by Vanessa Todd & Penny Cameron, 1996, UTS, Australia. For non-profit educational use only.以上就是小编为大家整理的实用材料,希望对您有所帮助!想了解更多信息请登录 雅思中国网资料中心 或登录雅思论坛 提出问题。 最后祝愿各位考生顺利通过,早日完成留学梦想!!

雅思写作美文鉴赏:医院服务对于病人康复影响